Selasa, 11 Februari 2014

Nisa's Holiday

Guys, let me tell you about my classmate's holiday. Her name is Nabila Khairunnisa. After final examination, holiday was coming for all of the students at the college. And my friend, Nisa made some planning during holiday. The first, she went to her hometown and she went to Padang Sidempuan with her family to attended her brother's wedding party. After this she traveled around the Padang Sidempuan to see another places. And then she back to her hometown for five days. In there, she just stayed at home and she told her experience to her mother about what happened to her since at the college. And sometime she rearranged a lot of thing in her house. At January 9 she went to Padang, because her friends invited her to see their senior show at the college. After two days she went to her hometown. And then she went camping to Pasaman Mountain for three days. She just stayed at home and reunion with old friends in senior high school. After that she went to Air bangis beach. Finally, she went to Padang for continued her study, because holiday was over.

4 komentar:

  1. wow it is good.
    but i found little mistake,i think you must to use past tense with your sentense "She told her experience to her mother" and you should be make "experienced" ^^

    BalasHapus
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    1. Thanks Erin.
      I think it still experience, because it is noun.
      But, if experience is verb, so it will be experienced.
      Depends of the sentence.
      Hmm, i'm still confuse about that.

      Hapus
  2. Hi...
    I want remind you about infinitive. After infinitive, please put verb 1. Example to attended. Change with verb 1, so, to attend....
    That's all..

    BalasHapus
  3. Okay, after to we must use verb 1.
    thanks dear :D

    BalasHapus